22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3
Reflection:
I didn't receive any feedback on my second elevator pitch. However, after reviewing the video, I decided to change my environment and use hand gestures relevant to my conversation. I attempted to appear more personable when presenting my pitch. I adjusted the wording slightly and inserted vocal pauses to emphasize my points.
I loved watching this pitch! Everything was so well thought out! You were able to describe exactly what you were while also explaining what made you unique. The phrasing " you coming in as yourself and leave as yourself" is something that I found to be a great choice of words. Overall, I think the pauses and the wording made the pitch to be personable yet enthusiastic! I am excited to see your future endeavors.
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